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Module one of the writing course: how to be cautious and hedge claims in academic English, with four practice questions, a ranking task, a final self-check with model answers, and tap-for-Japanese help, for Japanese researchers at B1 and B2 levels

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Stage 1 · Foundations · Module 1

Being cautious: how to soften a claim

Good academic writers are careful. They do not say a thing is 100% true when there is a small doubt. They soften the claim. Look at the same idea, said two ways:

Drinking alcohol causes breast cancer. (too strong — sounds like a final fact)
Some studies suggest that drinking alcohol may increase the risk of breast cancer. (careful — leaves room for doubt)

A soft word like "suggest" or "may" is called a hedge. To hedge means to soften a claim so it is not too strong. You will see this word again below. The rule of this whole lesson is simple: use enough caution — not too little, not too much. In a short claim, one or two careful signals are usually enough.

The strength ladder — from soft to strong

Pick your word to match how sure you are. These all fit: "These storms ___ be caused by climate change."

may / might / could
not sure
is likely to
fairly sure
almost certainly
very sure

In many parts of a paper, especially when explaining results, the left side is safer. Strong claims need strong proof.

Two more ways to be careful
It is thought that There is some evidence to suggest that … These results suggest that … X tends to
A trap to watch — too many hedges
A little caution is good, but do not pile up soft words. "It may possibly perhaps be the case" uses three hedges at once, and that sounds weak and unsure. One clear hedge is usually enough.
It may perhaps possibly be due to heat. (too many — three hedges)
It may be due to heat. (one clear hedge)
Soften the claim — choose the careful verb

"These results ______ that there is a link between sleep and memory."

suggest prove show clearly confirm
Match the strength — pick the right modal

"We only had a small sample, so this difference ______ be due to chance."

could will must does
Avoid over-generalising — choose the careful opener

"______, students who sleep well do better in exams." (you mean: this is the usual pattern, not every single student)

In general Always Without doubt Of course
Report a common view — keep your distance

"It is ______ that early humans first used fire around one million years ago." (you are reporting a common view, not your own proof)

thought known obvious true
Put these in order — drag the best to the top

All three report the same finding from one small study. Drag them so the most careful one is at the top.

Best — most careful
1 This study proves that coffee makes people live longer.
2 This study may possibly perhaps show that coffee could maybe help people live longer.
3 This study suggests that coffee may help people live longer.
Worst — too strong or too soft
Final self-check — choose the best cautious version

Three research claims, each written three ways. For each one, tap the version that is careful and right — not too strong, not too soft. You will see at once if it is the best choice.

Claim 1 — a result from one small study

This proves that exercise improves memory.
This suggests that exercise may improve memory.
This may possibly perhaps show that exercise improves memory.

Claim 2 — a pattern with some exceptions

Older patients always respond slowly to the drug.
Older patients sort of tend to maybe respond slowly.
Older patients tend to respond slowly to the drug.

Claim 3 — reporting a common view, not your own proof

It is thought that the ritual had a social purpose.
It is obvious that the ritual had a social purpose.
This proves the ritual had a social purpose.
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